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manniac
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(1/10/04 7:54 am)
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Arrival/Departure
Found this in the Jan 12th issue of The New Yorker magazine. I'm not crazy about the structure of the poem, but I like what it's saying.


THE ANSWER

Leaving the house,
the house will be
left completely,
from cellar to
attic my absence
entire.

Do I enter the world
the same,
my presence felt
from cloud
to ditch?

Only in departure whole.
Arrival
is always partial.

---Bill Knott



I like it. It makes me ponder the many implications.

In our relationship with anything external, only our absence from the relationship can be finite. Anything short of absence is a gradient shade of gray. There can be "nothing" but there can not be "everything". To be fully existing requires a level of comfort in being absent from the external and fully occupied internally.

A quote from I don't remember where:

"All men die. Few men really live."

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The next best thing to playing and winning....is playing and losing

blisslessly
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Posts: 152
(1/10/04 1:53 pm)
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being and time
Our existence is always part of a bigger world. So our absence is like a missing jigsaw puzzle, but our presence is a continuation of the bigger picture.

Beautiful poem, though i agree with you about the structure.

Keld Feldspar
Zetetic
Posts: 108
(1/10/04 9:44 pm)
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re
Similar to: Life is a journey not a destination.

DeShaz
Itinerate Poet
Posts: 229
(1/11/04 10:35 pm)
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Re: re
Death is not the greatest loss in life,
The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.
~Norman Cousins


"I like long walks, especially when they are taken by people
who annoy me."
-Noel Coward

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