Collective Poem v6.0

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manniac

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Posts: 343
(1/11/03 11:17 pm)
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Collective Poem v6.0

Where have you been?
I worried, you know

LaHibou

Pique Performer
Posts: 49
(1/13/03 5:38 am)
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The roads have black ice
And the air's filled with snow

manniac

dharma explorer
Posts: 344
(1/13/03 6:42 am)
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Why didn't you call?
I've been pacing all night

Edited by: manniac at: 1/13/03 6:45:38 am

LaHibou

Pique Performer
Posts: 50
(1/13/03 7:57 am)
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I kept seeing your face
Lost in blizzards of white.

manniac

dharma explorer
Posts: 345
(1/13/03 9:29 pm)
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How could you think
That I'd be fast asleep?

Edited by: manniac at: 1/13/03 9:31:10 pm

Keld Feldspar

Zetetic
Posts: 73
(1/14/03 11:47 pm)
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to find that you'd gone
did you think I'd not weep

manniac

dharma explorer
Posts: 349
(1/15/03 7:46 am)
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Your hair is disheveled,
Your clothes are a mess

LaHibou

Pique Performer
Posts: 51
(1/15/03 10:49 am)
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There's blood on your cheek
And Scotch on your breath.

Falderal

Posts: 55
(1/15/03 1:09 pm)
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Upon your brow
Lies the pulp of an orange... :evil

Edited by: Falderal at: 1/15/03 3:20:03 pm

NousPoetikos

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Posts: 465
(1/15/03 8:38 pm)
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My dear, I confess:
I fear you're deranged
to have left me alone
in this state of m�lange

:smokin

Had you called or sent word,
I'd stop with my nit,
but now as things stand,
I think you're a twit.

Edited by: NousPoetikos at: 1/15/03 8:50:53 pm

manniac

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Posts: 350
(1/15/03 9:43 pm)
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Sit down, prop your feet up
You fucking ingrate.

This is the last time
You'll keep me up late.

I'll empty upon you
This bottle of vodka

Then strike my last match
And throw it upon ya!

NousPoetikos

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Posts: 468
(1/15/03 9:49 pm)
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...erm.
[Nous promptly *unprops* her feet from the side of the desk she's typing on and looks furtively around the room as she recalls manniac's stint in military intelligence.]

manniac

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Posts: 351
(1/15/03 9:57 pm)
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<chuckle>

I'm kind of like Santa Claus...

NousPoetikos

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Posts: 470
(1/15/03 10:01 pm)
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It's the "kind of" part that worries me...

manniac

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Posts: 352
(1/15/03 10:08 pm)
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You're a sweetheart, Nous. I had a real bitch of a day, and you made me laugh out loud. Thanks. I really needed it. :rollin

manniac

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Posts: 356
(1/16/03 10:12 pm)
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Nous - Since we have violated the rules of Ex Nihilo, do you think these last few non-poetic posts should be deleted?

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There are no maps of unexplored places

NousPoetikos

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(1/16/03 10:20 pm)
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Hey there,
I can't bring myself to delete a happy ending.

Besides, I want the pleasure of gloating when Falderal sees that I defeated his anti-rhyme.

Perhaps you can try out your new mod powers and move it to Fluffy?
Take a deep breath...and shazam!

Falderal

Posts: 56
(1/17/03 2:12 am)
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D'oh!

Rhymes may not burn me nor singe

Nor cause mind to put "un" before "hinge"

But Nous knew how to screw

Best laid plans of a shrew

Tickled navel, but squished my orange !

manniac

dharma explorer
Posts: 362
(1/18/03 9:24 pm)
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Nous - Oh, lets leave it here. This is where it was born and where it belongs. Besides...I promised myself to never use the power unless I really needed to.

Falderal - You should come around here more often. I miss your humor.

NousPoetikos

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Posts: 484
(1/18/03 10:38 pm)
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GLOAT

Thank you, Falderal. That was most satisfactory.

Cool, manniac, here it shall remain...

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