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blisslessly
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Posts: 31
(3/9/03 3:48 pm)
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Haiku Erotica!
(From Language)
By blisslessly :
testing
tongue flicker
turned cheek
By DeShaz :
gasping
ragged breath
release
By manniac
can't breathe
contraction
small death
a little more explicit:
tongue parts
folds of flesh
finds pearl
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
...and give me wings...
blisslessly
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Posts: 33
(3/9/03 3:52 pm)
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Re: Haiku Erotica!
handcuffs
teddy bear
unchaste
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
...and give me wings...
manniac
dharma explorer
Posts: 458
(3/9/03 4:26 pm)
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Haiku Erotica!
fetish
curious
tempt me
blisslessly
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Posts: 36
(3/9/03 6:55 pm)
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couldn't sleep until i got this out of my system
shy smile
frightened heart
can't breath
chit chat
patience lost
contact
dark smirk
honeyed words
more skin
pulls close
guides her hand
air's thin
lucid
trying hard
virgin
***
...give me wings.........
DeShaz
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Posts: 90
(3/9/03 11:23 pm)
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Re: couldn't sleep until i got this out of my system
once more
temptation
fools me
fluttersby
Zen Butterfly
Posts: 245
(3/11/03 11:32 am)
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Re: couldn't sleep until i got this out of my system
cool air
outside steamed
windows
"The world is all gates, all opportunities, strings of tension waiting to be struck." - Ralph Waldo Emerson
Edited by: fluttersby at: 3/11/03 1:13:31 pm
Damnit Jim
Mood Sea
Posts: 120
(3/11/03 2:51 pm)
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Now in my system...can't sleep
a time
it happens
eyes meet
interest
conversing
leave street
smiling
hands touching
hearts beat
silence
a moment
lips meet
secrets
fall aside
hearts speak
dizzy
desire
knees weak
they walk
together
in heat
arrive
clothing falls
skin sweet
passion
overtakes
love speaks
so warm
so perfect
souls meet
explode
together
complete
all done?
just starting.
repeat.
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Other than THAT, Mrs. Lincoln, how was the play?
Edited by: Damnit Jim at: 3/11/03 7:31:28 pm
DeShaz
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Posts: 99
(3/11/03 3:04 pm)
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Wow!
Oh my god DJ .......I like it!!!
Better your own truth, however weak, than the truth of another, however noble.
~Shakyamuni Buddha
manniac
dharma explorer
Posts: 472
(3/11/03 8:48 pm)
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You can say that again!
Wow, are we a bunch of horny poets or what!
These are some of the best haiku we've had here...and DJ , that is a masterpiece that I am going to copy and save.
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The next best thing to playing and winning....is playing and losing
DeShaz
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Posts: 104
(3/11/03 11:16 pm)
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Re: You can say that again!
Agreed, manniac ...and I can't help keep coming back to this one....
tongue parts
folds of flesh
finds pearl
I'm giving up on being depressed....and going to have to put some work into this...this is fun!
Better your own truth, however weak, than the truth of another, however noble.
~Shakyamuni Buddha
blisslessly
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Posts: 54
(3/12/03 9:26 am)
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Re: Now in my system...can't sleep
Damn!
DJ that was a definite keeper. Repeat! Repeat! C'mon DJ spin that s**t!
all done?
*apishtakapishtakapishtakapishtaka*
just starting.
*aboomlakaboomlakaboomlakaboomlaka*
repeat.
*apishtakapishtakapishtakapishtaka*
all done?
tsss...tsss....tsss....tsss
hey sexy baby put the record on you know you drive me crazy!
You know DJ, I can see those Fashion TV models struttin down the catwalks on that stuff!! What an adrenalin mover!
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...give me wings.........
Damnit Jim
Mood Sea
Posts: 126
(3/12/03 11:24 am)
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*
Quote: *apishtakapishtakapishtakapishtaka*
I always wanted to know how to spell that. I will add it to my repertoire if you don't mind.
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Other than THAT, Mrs. Lincoln, how was the play?
fluttersby
Zen Butterfly
Posts: 250
(3/12/03 11:53 am)
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Back to the haiku . . .
kisses -
once stolen
now free
****
tresses
lingering
on skin
****
urgent
need becomes
soft moans
****
fluttersby
"The world is all gates, all opportunities, strings of tension waiting to be struck." - Ralph Waldo Emerson
Edited by: fluttersby at: 3/12/03 11:54:43 am
blisslessly
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Posts: 57
(3/12/03 5:05 pm)
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Re: *
As long as you give me credit!
And for your signature, "how did you enjoy the play?" is better.
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...give me wings.........
blisslessly
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Posts: 58
(3/12/03 6:38 pm)
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Re: Back to the haiku . . .
This one's inspired by Fluttersby:
soft moans
tease me more
all night
back arched
for a touch
muscles tight
keep me
thrashing wild
wrists tied
breathe close
not enough
straining
hot skin
don't relent
come! wait!
blood pounds
play the game
pleading
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
...give me wings.........
Damnit Jim
Mood Sea
Posts: 129
(3/12/03 7:16 pm)
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*
breathe in
knowing hands...
breathe out
slowly...
tenderly...
breathe in
warm breath...
tender kiss...
breathe out
light touch...
tender tongue...
breathe in
dizzy
cannot wait
breathe out
closer
ever closer
breathe in
it's found!
my treasure...
breathe fast
for me?
all for me!?
your turn.
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...er...I'm going to smoke a cigarette after that...first I'll have to take up smoking. Wrote it to work from both perspectives...yowsa.
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Other than THAT, Mrs. Lincoln, how was the play?
Edited by: Damnit Jim at: 3/12/03 7:32:38 pm
DeShaz
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Posts: 107
(3/13/03 12:37 am)
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Re: *
DAMN!
Okay....DJ ....WOW!
Better your own truth, however weak, than the truth of another, however noble.
~Shakyamuni Buddha
blisslessly
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Posts: 59
(3/13/03 6:48 am)
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Re: *
yowsa!
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...give me wings.........
manniac
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Posts: 475
(3/13/03 11:25 pm)
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Re: *
so soft
embraces
so hard
*****
soft beard
inner thigh
tickle
*****
firm flesh
fuzzy peach
so sweet
*****
taste it?
looks like a
taco!
blisslessly
Registered User
Posts: 62
(3/15/03 1:28 pm)
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really manniac, that was in bad taste.
taco!
cucumber!
cocktail!
eros
is puking
love fails
Damnit Jim
Mood Sea
Posts: 133
(3/16/03 11:27 am)
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Re:
that was
quite clever
bliss-ly
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Other than THAT, Mrs. Lincoln, how was the play?