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DeShaz
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(2/7/03 6:08 pm)
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Poetry Challenge
I was challenged last night to write a poem with an odd collection of 5 words. Okay, I was doing someone else's homework...

I'd love to see what the poets around here could do with these: chameleon, grassland, longevity, mocking bird, remote It was supposed to be 10 lines...too bad.

My own offering:

remote call of the mocking bird
echos in the grassland
dawn's light and morning's breeze
dry the lingering dew
chameleon face of the prarie
reflects the longevity of nature
seasons, moments, always changing
breathing life anew.

manniac
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(2/7/03 8:49 pm)
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Re: Poetry Challenge
Lush grassland gone to wasteland,
That's what longevity brings.
Far remote from what once was;
The memory still stings.

Chameleon dove became a snake;
She struck me unaware.
Then dove became a mocking bird,
And left my soul laid bare.





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edited to add: Come on! I know some of you folks can come up with something. :p

Edited by: manniac at: 2/10/03 8:50:30 pm
Keld Feldspar
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(2/10/03 10:57 pm)
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Re: Poetry Challenge
in a grassland sea
is a remote tree
statuesque
even arabesque

at it's base
a chameleon is born
post haste
a mocking birds lunch

longevity not
such is life's lot

blisslessly
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(3/6/03 8:38 pm)
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Re: Poetry Challenge
Folks once flourished here
On dewy grasslands now remote
Where dust settled like desert sand
Dunes defying longevity of man
And etchings on cave walls drawn before
Sheer chameleons never-changing
And humming tunes of lively morns
Fell silent as mocking birds
Beak ajar, choked in mid-crow.

LaHibou
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Posts: 59
(3/7/03 6:45 am)
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Challenge
Pray forgive, my rigid stucture exceeded the line limit :o



Consumed with thought (and by vintage port)
I drift off to worlds unacclaimed.
A chameleon blinks as it mixes it’s drinks
It’s vodka, it’s orange, it’s shame.

In the rumour mill I stand stock still
Listening for the grind of the boat
My ship’s come in now my blood is too thin
Yet I’m standing alone and remote.

By drinking the barm I take Mockingbird charm
Grasslands will sway but not I
Longevity beckons, the Chameleon reckons,
He swivels, it’s all in the eye.
;)

Falderal

Posts: 61
(3/7/03 11:10 am)
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Re: Challenge
Chameleon, mocking bird of light, becomes stone in the grassland:
Ensuring longevity by being remote

The light of love plays many tricks of its own, however,
And a bargain for safety soon becomes sellout

The grass will wither unattended - undesired
Until all that lives is cool stone

And distance becomes the con artists new medium
The chameleon rubs with gritty surrogate shoulders

Only to realize far too late in the day as stone becomes dust
The world is a field of chameleons.

CC Vulture
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(8/12/05 8:11 am)
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Re: Poetry Challenge
In my grass-land I knew this chameleon,
Whose mood-hue-shifts gave me a steely-on.
Despite my longevity
The bird mocked my brevity.
Now I let some remote suitor feel he won.

CCV

or...

Chameleon

"Longevity = Grassland, mocking remote bird"

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