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GrungyParadigm
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(5/19/06 7:14 pm)
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Thought I would share one...
Usually I just post poems to my personal blogs, but I rediscovered this page today... so I thought I'd post something.

the dance of men

bruises and heat
clenched teeth
white hot fists
frenzied mind
pain
shaking so hard
it hurts to think
eyes blur
in the rage
crunching jaw
lungs breathe
pure hate
pink and purple
tender and red
body soaking in the love
of the dance
the rush intoxicates
it brings clarity
and instinct
lust
and hate
it feeds on the
survival
growing power
from the blur
of red
and white hot fists

j-

DeShaz 
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Posts: 338
(5/19/06 10:04 pm)
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Re: Thought I would share one...
I like this one J. Haven't seen you around in a long, long time.

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GrungyParadigm
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Posts: 10
(5/22/06 6:49 pm)
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Re: Thought I would share one...
Thank you much dear :P

CC Vulture
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Posts: 62
(5/23/06 5:25 pm)
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Fight night
This is a good, adrenalin filled bout of philosophy.

CCV

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