Lord of Isengard
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(2/4/03 6:22 am) Reply
Re: Renaissance story. by: Me.
When Daisy says "When you least expect it" to Hamish regarding the necklace. She may or may not be referring to the necklace.
I shut my eyes and turned them on my heart. As a man calls for wine before he fights, I asked one draught of earlier, happier sights, Ere fitly I could hope to play my part. Think first, fight afterwards--the soldier's art: One taste of the old time sets all to rights.
~Robert Browning~
DaisyTook Princess of Windigate
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(2/5/03 10:24 am) Reply
Re: Renaissance story. by: Me.
((When I wrote it I never though about that. Here's the next chapter.))
Chapter 7
The next day Daisy went back to the jewelry shoppe. She let her mother know she was leaving the castle walls for a little bit. The Queen said it was all right for her to leave, and told her to be careful. Daisy left the castle in a rush. She never even thought that Hamish saw her leaving the castle.
Upstairs Hamish looked out from the balcony by his room, and noticed Daisy running from the castle. He wanted to follow her, and see why she left. Then decided not to. He stayed in his room talking with his brothers. Conner told Hamish that Daisy would be fine and not to worry about it.
Outside by the jewelry shoppe, Daisy found the necklace Hamish wanted. She paid Molly Mallone the six pence for the necklace. Then, trying not to be bothersome, she asked to have it wrapped. She left the shoppe and was about to go home, but Sir Eric stopped her.
Sir Eric was standing in front of her with a few of his lackeys. With him were Sir Arthur Gorges, Sir Fuzzy Summers, Danny Lord, and Mad Tom O’Bedlam. Sir Eric had asked Daisy why she was out by herself. She ignored him and kept walking for the castle. Then he grabbed her tightly by the arm.
Daisy had ordered him to let got, but he did not listen and tightened his grip. Sir Eric turned to face her. He said to her in a low angry voice, “I will never let you go until you agree to marry me.”
Daisy looked him in the eyes and replied, “No. I’d rather you have me killed, than me having to look at your face every morning when I wake.”
“That can be arranged,” He said, still in that low angry tone. “It shall be done tonight.”
Daisy gave him a frightful stare as Sir Eric and his friends laughed like raving lunatics. Rose and Meri were passing by, and saw Daisy standing there with them. They took her out of that little circle they had made around her. Sir Eric saw this and did not bother to follow them. Danny Lord asked him if he was going to follow, and Sir Eric told Danny that he was not, and to go find the others to meet him in the pub.
Danny did as he was instructed to do. Sir Eric then ran to the pub and waited for his friends. Ten minutes passed and Danny Lord showed up with the others. They found Sir Eric sitting at a corner of the room, and sat with him. They had asked him what he wanted to talk about.
Sir Eric started out by saying he had a plan on how to get Daisy to marry him. They listened in closer to what he had to say. Then he told them a plan that was most devious. He told them that they all were to kidnap the younger twin Princess. Sir Eric also said he knew which room, and which bed that she slept in, and he would accompany his friends in this kidnapping.
Inside the castle Meri and Rose asked Daisy why she was out by herself in the town. She told them that she wanted to leave the castle to get Hamish another wedding gift. Meri told Daisy it was no reason to go out there by herself. Then Daisy told her sisters that she did not want to be too long. She also said that she did not know Sir Eric even knew she was there.
Meri and Rose hugged their sister and said they were glad she was not injured or killed. Then the three of them left the bedroom to walk down to the dining hall. When they got to the staircase, Dominic, Elijah, and Hamish were waiting for them. Meri, Rose, and Daisy finally reached the last stair and took the arms of their men. Then they all walked into the dining hall together.
Inside the dining hall Queen Elizabeth, Conner, Duncan, and Angus were sitting, and waiting for them. When Daisy, Hamish, Meri, Dominic, Rose, and Elijah stepped into the room they sat down at the table. Then dinner was set out. Plates were set out in front of them. Then the silverware was last to be set out.
Everyone began eating his or her dinner. Once dinner was over, desserts were served. Then after desserts everyone sat talking. Dominic and Elijah knelt down on one knee as Meri and Rose looked away from them. When Rose and Meri turned back to them, Dominic and Elijah proposed to them.
After sitting in astonishment Meri and Rose both accepted the engagement rings, and hugged their now fiancés. Daisy, Meri, and Rose ran outside to the garden to talk. Hamish, Dominic and Elijah tried to follow, but Queen Elizabeth stopped them. Then Queen Elizabeth asked Dominic and Elijah if they were going to stay and live in the castle with Daisy, herself, and Hamish. The two of them nodded and said that they would stay in the castle.
It was ten of the clock at night and it was time for bed. Daisy Meri and Rose were already in bed asleep. Hamish, Duncan, Conner, and Angus were just getting to bed. Dominic and Elijah were invited to sleep in the castle. Queen Elizabeth was asleep in bed already.
Outside the castle Sir Eric, Mad Tom, Sir Fuzzy Summers, Danny Lord, Sir Arthur Gorges were under the balcony of Daisy, Meri, and Rose’s bedroom. He climbed the pillar to the balcony, once at the balcony he climbed over the railing. When he reached the floor he walked into the bedroom to check if the three princesses were asleep.
When Sir Eric found all three girls asleep, he walked back out to the balcony and called for the others to come up. Once they were on the balcony, all five of them walked into the room. Sir Eric told Danny to stand to the right of Daisy’s bed. He did as he was told, and stood there. Then Sir Eric told Mad tom, and Sir Fuzzy Summers to get the rope ready to tie her up, which they did.
Sir Eric, then, covered Daisy’s mouth and she awoke with a muffled scream. Meri and Rose did not wake up from the sound of the scream that was muffled. Sir Fuzzy Summers and Mad Tom O’Bedlam tied her up with the rope. Then Sir Eric tied a cloth around Daisy’s head so it would cover her mouth and she could not wake anyone else. After that was all finished Sir Eric, Danny Lord, Sir Fuzzy Summers, Mad Tom O’Bedlam and Sir Arthur Gorges took her back to their hideout.
Lord of Isengard
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(2/7/03 5:19 am) Reply
Re: Renaissance story. by: Me.
Gorges can be pronounced at gorgeous.
I seem to be the only one reading your story.
I shut my eyes and turned them on my heart. As a man calls for wine before he fights, I asked one draught of earlier, happier sights, Ere fitly I could hope to play my part. Think first, fight afterwards--the soldier's art: One taste of the old time sets all to rights.
~Robert Browning~
DaisyTook Princess of Windigate
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(2/7/03 12:14 pm) Reply
Re: Renaissance story. by: Me.
Well I tried to ask them in RB's story, but it didn't work. Elfie only replied once. Even though she's one of the ones who I first let read it.
Re: Renaissance story. by: Me.
I resent that!! I've read each and every chapter of your story!! I just cant come online much these days and then it goes at the rewriting.
Ilya i ná malta úmirilya, lá ilyë yantë ranya nar vanwë;
i tulca enwinawë úquela,
nurë sundar arahtier lá ringwenen.
Erinillon nárë núva coivana.
DaisyTook Princess of Windigate
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(2/20/03 10:14 pm) Reply
Re: Renaissance story. by: Me.
((I'm sorry. here's the next chapter.))
Chapter 8
The next morning when Rose and Meri awoke, they went over to Daisy’s bed to wake her up. When they got to her bed, they found it a mess and hardly slept in. They had gotten all worked up and ran downstairs to their mother. Once in the dining hall, Queen Elizabeth was sitting in Daisy’s chair crying. Meri and Rose went over to their mother, hugged her and asked what was wrong.
Queen Elizabeth looked her two daughters in the eyes and told them that Daisy had been kidnapped last night. Meri and Rose were about to go tell Hamish, but Queen Elizabeth disallowed it. She said not to tell him, for he would suspect every man who ever liked her. Then Meri and Rose sat in their chairs at the table and waited for the McManly brothers, Dominic and Elijah. Queen Elizabeth wiped away the lines of tears from her face and sat in her own chair.
After the Queen, Meri and Rose settled in their chairs, Hamish, Duncan, Conner, Angus, Dominic, and Elijah all walked in. Hamish walked in looking around for Daisy, then asked where she was. Queen Elizabeth dropped her fork, eyes starting to tear up; told him that Daisy was gravely ill. Conner noticed that Queen Elizabeth was crying. He asked her to speak with him out in the hallway.
Queen Elizabeth walked through the door as Conner held it for her. Then he followed her once she went through. Once they left the dining hall Angus, Dominic, Duncan, Elijah, Hamish, Meri, and Rose started a conversation. Out in the hallway Conner asked Queen Elizabeth why she was crying. She replied, “Daisy had been kidnapped. I haven’t a clue where she is.”
“When was she kidnapped?” Conner asked.
“Last night. I haven’t a clue who took her either. Who would do such a foolish thing?”
As soon as the Queen told Conner what happened to Daisy, Bardolfe walked in and said that he knew who had kidnapped Daisy. Queen Elizabeth and Conner both stared at him and asked who had kidnapped her. He said that it was five men who pulled off the crime. It was Sir Eric, Mad Tom O’Bedlam, Sir Fuzzy Summers, Danny Lord, and Sir Arthur Gorges. Then Queen Elizabeth broke into tears even worse than before.
Bardolfe felt guilty for telling Her Majesty about who kidnapped Daisy. Queen Elizabeth saw his face and told him not to look so glum. She then thanked him for telling her who kidnapped her daughter. At that moment Bardolfe felt his guilt lift from his shoulders. Then he told the Queen she was very welcome, he bowed to Her Majesty and left the castle.
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"I'm only here for the hobbits."
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DaisyTook Princess of Windigate
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(3/3/03 7:15 pm) Reply
In their hideout Sir Eric, Mad Tom O’Bedlam, Danny Lord, Sir Arthur Gorges, and Sir Fuzzy Summers were sitting at the table in the kitchen. Downstairs in the storage room was Daisy tied to a pillar with her hands tied behind her around the pillar. She tried to struggle from the ropes binding her, but they were a bit tight. Then Daisy remembered that she had a dagger with her, which was in her belt. She felt around for it, finally getting to it, and started cutting through the rope.
On the floor above her, Daisy could hear some people walking towards the trap door above the storage room. Those same people walked outside to the main door to the storage room. Once the door opened she saw who came in the room. It was Rodney Stench, Seymore Boddees, and Lanky. Daisy tried to get them to help her from her bindings, but they would not help her.
Sir Eric heard Daisy asking for help, as he was in the kitchen while she was asking for help. He walked over to the trap door, opened it, and jumped down to where Daisy was, and pointed his sword at her neck. Sir Eric, extremely angered, told Daisy he would kill her if she did not keep her peace. She looked at him with an expression that seemed to say, “I dare you.” Then he, Rodney Stench, Seymore Boddees, and Lanky left to go back upstairs to the kitchen. Mad Tom O’Bedlam closed the trap door once they were out of the storage room.
After everyone left the storage room, Daisy had the third rope cut, which slightly loosened the fourth rope. She slipped through the fourth rope with ease, and looked around for a way to escape. She tried the door, which was not locked. Daisy peeked outside, and found no one walking around. Since no one was around Daisy ran from the room in a hurry, leaving the door to the storage room opened.
Chapter 10
At the castle Queen Elizabeth was still out in the main hallway with Conner. Hamish came in, practically breaking down the doors, saying he heard about Daisy being kidnapped. He admitted that he was listening through the doors. Hamish demanded to know where his fiancée was. Queen Elizabeth and Conner told him that Daisy was with Sir Eric.
Hamish walked upstairs, eyes burning like charcoal. Conner had followed him asking what he was going to do. Hamish looked at his brother and told Conner that he was going to get his fiancée back. They both got to the bedroom and Hamish looks around for his sword, then finds it. As he goes to pick it up, Conner tries to convince him not to do anything irrational, or something he’ll regret for the rest of his life.
Then the two brothers left the room and Conner still rambling on about not killing Sir Eric. Then the two of them walked downstairs. Once they reached the same place the Queen was, they saw Daisy and her mother hugging one another. Hamish had a surprised look on his face. Daisy stared at him, and excused herself from her mother, then walked over to Hamish.
Hamish had asked Daisy why she was bleeding and had all these bruises on her. She told him that Sir Eric had beaten and whipped her. Then Hamish became even more infuriated and wanted to murder Sir Eric. Daisy said she did not want to have him killed. Then Hamish looked at her and said, “Alright. I will not kill him. If that is what you wish.”
With a slightly evil grin Daisy said she would rather he be tortured. Then she changed her mind since it was not in her nature to torture people. Then Queen Elizabeth had an idea. She told Daisy and Hamish that maybe they could move to Scotland with a going away party, and then come back with out anyone knowing. Then Daisy gave her mother an odd look, and said, “That might not be such a bad idea, mum. Just move to Scotland for a few months, like she said with a going away party. Then we send a letter to let you know we are coming back. Then come back on a different boat so no one knows who it is, and they would not care.”
Hamish then chimed in, “Yes. And when we come back we’ll dress like townspeople. Just so no one knows who we are.”
After Hamish had said that, Sir Eric showed up. No one knew how he got in without the guards knowing. Then he said he came in through Daisy’s room. He walked downstairs with his sword in hand. Then he said, “And then once I hear about this plan to make me forget about the Princess, which will never happen, I will kill her and Hamish. Won’t that be a sad ending to this life? Oh Princess. Pray tell. How did you escape the rope that was binding you?”
Daisy replied, while hiding behind Hamish, “What do you care? It was my own little plan on escaping.”
“If you do not tell me, I will kill you. Tell me how you got away, or your mother will be the first to be killed,” Sir Eric demanded.
When Sir Eric did not get an answer from Daisy, he charged at her. Hamish drew his sword and swung it at him. Sir Eric’s sword broke in half; Hamish brought his sword to Sir Eric’s neck. He threw his arms in the air. Daisy ran from the castle to have the town sheriff arrest Sir Eric.
Daisy came back, two minutes later, with Dominae Tryst behind her. Dominae places shackles on his wrists and drags Sir Eric onto a cart to take him to prison. Then Dominae Tryst climbed into the driver’s seat of the cart, and drove away to the prison to put Sir Eric in jail. Once he’s gone Hamish walks Daisy to the hospital wing of the castle to get her wounds checked. Then Queen Elizabeth and Conner walk back into the dining hall to report Daisy is home again.
Lord of Isengard
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(3/26/03 5:48 am) Reply
Re: Renaissance story. by: Me.
I've read up to this part and it's good. Was there more?
Do not meddle in the affairs of Wizards, for they are subtle and quick to anger.
DaisyTook Princess of Windigate
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(4/15/03 3:55 am) Reply
Re: Renaissance story. by: Me.
There was, but my dad erased my whole story when he fixed the computer. Arrg! I hate this stupid thing. *kicks computer*
*english accent*
Meri: I'll turn you into a chicken.
Daisy: But I don't want to be a chicken! Can't I be something less... Chickeny?
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