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Merrow8
New Student/Teachers Apprentice
Posts: 6
(6/22/04 11:36 am)
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understanding
ok not so good with structures and stuff like that but hope someone understands it.
Mirror coloured eyes
she shows no truth
finding no place
that's understood
she fixes her smile
Picasso based
hiding the reason
for her hardened face
trapped in a body
needing a soul
looking for something
to make her feel whole
stood on a cliff edge
a water filled scene
a pasionate ocean
a sky dark and serene
a calming breeze
tide roles to shore
a reassurance
that this means more
look to your heart
and look to the earth
fill yourself with its beauty
and feel your rebirth
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Phuridai 
She stands Tall and Walks Free
Posts: 146
(6/22/04 12:48 pm)
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Re: understanding
Its quite good, Merrow!  
doll by Gr8Goddess
Blessed are the Fundamentalists, for they shall inhibit the earth.
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WalksWith
She Walks in Beauty and light
Posts: 76
(6/23/04 11:43 pm)
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Re: understanding
I agree! 
Light & Love
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